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10/07/2014 12:53 PM  #1


My Version of Cinderella + PLUS THE AFTER STORY!!!!!!!

I am going to make up a story about me, it's Cinderella based, I'll post it in chapters.

                    






CHAPTER 1
My name was Jazzerella. (XD) My mean stepsisters and stepmother made me work hard for them. My father was gone somewhere and had never returned. I worked hard, day and night. 








It was unfair, but if I didn't do the work they bossed me around to do, 






They would beat me. 


So I dutifully worked, scrubbing floors pitifully and cleaning up after the animals. 



One day, a letter came from the palace. I recieved it, being the servant girl and the only one home at that time, and looked at. it. I was surprised! and confused  It said this:



I begged and begged my stepmother and stepsisters to let me go. But they refused. 

I cried and cried and sobbed.  Finally my stepmother got SO annoyed,




She told me if I could find something acceptable to wear.


My real mother, now dead, had an old dress in a trunk upstairs in the attic where I slept. I put that on when the day of the ball came. "I'm ready!"  cried, presenting myself to my stpsisters.



You can tell what happened.



My dress was so more beautiful then theirs, they ripped me apart. They ripped me to shreds! Well, just the dress -  but now i had nothing to wear to the ball. They sped away in their carriage, leaving me standing there in shock.



Then my fairy godmother appeared........




SHE MADE EVERYTHING BETTAH!!!!

I went to the ball in a fancy horse carriage. "Have a nice time, Jazzerella!" she called after me.



I DANCED WITH THE PRINCE.



TO BE CONTINUED


Hello! My name is Jasmine aka the Glitter Gal. I like fashion and doing hair. Have a great day!
 

11/27/2014 10:30 AM  #2


Re: My Version of Cinderella + PLUS THE AFTER STORY!!!!!!!

More! Bump! More!

 

12/01/2014 11:21 AM  #3


Re: My Version of Cinderella + PLUS THE AFTER STORY!!!!!!!

Chapter 2
(yeah I skip a lot of stuff, it isn't exactly like the story. zerena and arelia are the stepsisters btw)

Wedding Day  

"Where are they?" I asked my father who had returned mysteriously for the wedding. "I don't know where your stepssisters or stepmother are." "But - don't they know I forgive them? Why won't they come to the wedding?" 

My father shrugged. "Can't look back now," he said as we took a step forward. 

We walked down the aisle.

Later....

YOU MAY NOW KISS THE BRIDE!!!!





We ran down the aisle after kissing as people threw rice at us. We laughed and held hands the whole time.



TWO DAYS LATER:

"I can't believe it!" Arelia cried. "Little Jazzerella - married to the prince! Ugh! Princess of all this land? It isn't fair!"

"Well, don't worry. I've got a plan to ruin her life with the prince FOREVER." Stepmother burst into the room.

"Yeah? Well, how?!" Zerena asked.

"Like this."



to be continued
 


My soon-to-be name is Demetria. I'm getting adopted very, very soon.
 Like Madison's getting 250$ very shortly kind of soon!
As soon as everything's settled in Florida, I'll be ordered! YES!!!!

 

12/01/2014 11:22 AM  #4


Re: My Version of Cinderella + PLUS THE AFTER STORY!!!!!!!

I posted this for Jasmine. Right now she's busy doing something else so she told me to post the next chapter.


My soon-to-be name is Demetria. I'm getting adopted very, very soon.
 Like Madison's getting 250$ very shortly kind of soon!
As soon as everything's settled in Florida, I'll be ordered! YES!!!!

 

3/10/2016 11:08 PM  #5


Re: My Version of Cinderella + PLUS THE AFTER STORY!!!!!!!

More! More! MORE! How about more of the adventures of Jazzerella, Jasmine? 😉


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You can find happiness right where you are... and at the ocean.
 

4/06/2016 8:04 PM  #6


Re: My Version of Cinderella + PLUS THE AFTER STORY!!!!!!!

Ooh, it's getting interesting...


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